Sunday, 17 March 2013

Fantastic Voyage: animatic V2


  1. Hey George,

    Just a few observations:

    1) much improved!
    2) However, everything is really dark and sombre - and while that might be a good thing, I'd suggest you think about your lighting much more - using glow and moodiness to really make this look the business. I think you need to be more bold in terms of highlights/rim lighting.
    3) Your typeface: it's a bit 'bookish', maybe too traditional? Also - I wondering about your decision to put black text on such a dark background? It's 'disappearing' your information on screen. I think you should invest a bit more time in a) designing your text elements in relation to the 'world' of your animation, and b) think about the colour.

    So - in short: lighting/rim lighting/glow/more contrast/more colour... & typeface.

    Keep going George - polish, remember, more polish! :)

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