Just a bit of feedback on your Art Of... I know you're telling a bitter-sweet story, but I think the grey background and greyish red font is giving your whole a project a too funereal quality. The typeface too has an ancient/Avatar-esque quality, which doesn't seem to suit your world. I'd suggest going for something much whiter, more 'honest' in terms of your art of - and using a typeface that has less baggage - maybe something very simple and honest. I just think your Art Of is too gloomy right now...
Hey George,
ReplyDeleteJust a bit of feedback on your Art Of... I know you're telling a bitter-sweet story, but I think the grey background and greyish red font is giving your whole a project a too funereal quality. The typeface too has an ancient/Avatar-esque quality, which doesn't seem to suit your world. I'd suggest going for something much whiter, more 'honest' in terms of your art of - and using a typeface that has less baggage - maybe something very simple and honest. I just think your Art Of is too gloomy right now...