We briefly discussed the importance of this project in terms of your development as a designer and artist. As I mentioned before this project has “identified a problem or a series of problems” that are stopping you being more successful on the course – Simply put, I don’t see any evidence of creative methodology in your work which is very worrying – The making of document backs that up, featuring only storyboards a single page of ‘generic’ sketches.
Rather than leave more feedback here please arrange to see me once you’re back from Prague. In the meantime, take a look at the links below and study the approach to design – Each of these projects have a rationale for design, a language, and visual literacy. Above all they avoid genericism and stick figures.
George,
ReplyDeleteWe briefly discussed the importance of this project in terms of your development as a designer and artist. As I mentioned before this project has “identified a problem or a series of problems” that are stopping you being more successful on the course – Simply put, I don’t see any evidence of creative methodology in your work which is very worrying – The making of document backs that up, featuring only storyboards a single page of ‘generic’ sketches.
Rather than leave more feedback here please arrange to see me once you’re back from Prague. In the meantime, take a look at the links below and study the approach to design – Each of these projects have a rationale for design, a language, and visual literacy. Above all they avoid genericism and stick figures.
http://peta-gayebrown.blogspot.co.uk/2014/02/how-to-make-your-own-cup-of-tea.html
http://jakejbryant.blogspot.co.uk/2014/02/video-infographics-war-time-career-of.html
http://emily-clarkson.blogspot.co.uk/2014/02/adaptation-part-infographic.html
http://samantha-niemczyk.blogspot.co.uk/2014/02/infographic-abc-of-procrastination-and.html