1) much improved! 2) However, everything is really dark and sombre - and while that might be a good thing, I'd suggest you think about your lighting much more - using glow and moodiness to really make this look the business. I think you need to be more bold in terms of highlights/rim lighting. 3) Your typeface: it's a bit 'bookish', maybe too traditional? Also - I wondering about your decision to put black text on such a dark background? It's 'disappearing' your information on screen. I think you should invest a bit more time in a) designing your text elements in relation to the 'world' of your animation, and b) think about the colour.
So - in short: lighting/rim lighting/glow/more contrast/more colour... & typeface.
Keep going George - polish, remember, more polish! :)
Hey George,
ReplyDeleteJust a few observations:
1) much improved!
2) However, everything is really dark and sombre - and while that might be a good thing, I'd suggest you think about your lighting much more - using glow and moodiness to really make this look the business. I think you need to be more bold in terms of highlights/rim lighting.
3) Your typeface: it's a bit 'bookish', maybe too traditional? Also - I wondering about your decision to put black text on such a dark background? It's 'disappearing' your information on screen. I think you should invest a bit more time in a) designing your text elements in relation to the 'world' of your animation, and b) think about the colour.
So - in short: lighting/rim lighting/glow/more contrast/more colour... & typeface.
Keep going George - polish, remember, more polish! :)
I appreciate it, thank you :)
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