tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5576666848462492887.post3323938540646827811..comments2023-10-11T07:55:14.755-07:00Comments on George Nwosisi: Space & Environment: Thumbnail (House)Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15455424854433182330noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5576666848462492887.post-85948071528174709292012-10-20T08:04:10.357-07:002012-10-20T08:04:10.357-07:00It's good to see new works from you, George : ...It's good to see new works from you, George : )<br />I think that if you work on this piece a little bit more, it will be a very good final piece. <br />To everything that Phil wrote I'd like to add one more thing - think about the lightning around the windows. If you want them to be purely white give the viewers a hint of "why they are so white". Maybe light beams on the ground, or some feathering around the window frames. <br />I'm encouraging you to trying different ideas and ways of achieving the "spooky mood" : )<br />Good luck and keep it up!Samanthahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03453618366954658286noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5576666848462492887.post-12549909166593389032012-10-20T01:33:17.865-07:002012-10-20T01:33:17.865-07:00Exciting George - well done for moving it along - ...Exciting George - well done for moving it along - but, in composition terms, just be aware of creating 'dead space' - for example the top right corner with the tree - if you squint at your thumbnail, you'll see that it just reads as a void and not as visual information. You need to ensure everything is contributing. Onwards, George, upwards! :) I look forward to seeing more on here soon.tutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.com